2008-08-12 // 18:13:42
zwartenwit
The slightly tilted lampshade makes the picture really interesting I think. It might be perfect without the piece of the bed, or with some more bed. However, it might also be that the picture will be very boring then. One way or another, I love the atmosphere and the lampshade!

^ I like the bit of bed :p and thanks for your feedback!

2008-08-12 // 10:44:21
zwartenwit
The atmosphere is really good in this picture. Lots of potential. The composition may be a bit straightforward in my opinion.

^ I was worried that the composition made it look like I was trying too hard.. the way the lampshade is tilted just a tad.